Rough cut

In my opinion the good points of the rough cut is firstly the part where the thief is walking towards the person who's computer is going to be taken because it looks realistic and it gives the perspcetive of what the thief is seeing. Secondly, the part where the thief is running with the laptop and is getting chased by the ower looks very realistic. On the other hand, the bad points are firstly that the running should be for longer to show when the thief and the computer owner lose eachother. Secondly, in the last shot we can see reflections of the other people that are not supposed to be in the shot.